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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take Y5dB

Dear sir/ madam, My name is Baljeet Singh Aulakh and I am doing part time evening course in your institute in section b class. I am writing a letter to talking about that I will be not able to complete this course due to my work. As I am doing full time job in Telus as tech and due to some circumstances, they asked me that I must do over time for few months because their one of tech got accident and will be not able to come work. Its is hard for me to do evening course because I will leave my work near 5 o clock then i also have to prepare food for my self because I am living alone. So, after doing all work, I will be tired and heard for me to do study. I would like to drop this course and will take in next semester. Thankyou for cooperation Baljeet

Dear sir/ madam,

My name is Possible spelling mistake found.BalletBaleenBaldest
Baljeet
 Singh Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Aulakh, and
Aulakh and
 I am doing This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 evening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 in your institute in section b This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
.

I am writing a letter to talking about that I will be not able to complete this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 due to my work. As I am doing full time job in Telus as tech and due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 circumstances, they asked me that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 do over time for few months This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 their one of tech This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 accident and will be not able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 work.

Its is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for me to do evening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 my work near 5 o clock then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 prepare food for my self This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am living alone. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, after doing all work, I will be tired
 and heard for me to do study. I would like to drop this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 and will take in next
 semester.

Possible spelling mistake found.Thank you
Thankyou
 for cooperation

Possible spelling mistake found.BalletBaleenBaldest
Baljeet