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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying the subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of the course you took at the university, explain why you recommended the university, give some advice about how to apply

A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying the subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of the course you took at the university, explain why you recommended the university, give some advice about how to apply 7xLY

Dear Sam, I recieved your letter about applying for the Financial Management course at University of Florida. I studied this course in 2018 and my tutor was Mr. Simon Black. The course code in the prospectus 2021 is changed to the one i studied in but the tutor is still the same. The course covers all the aspects of Financial Planning and analysis. There will be assignments relating to each topic which will help you have a good understanding of the topic and at the end of each topic you will be tested for your skill. University of Florida is best known for its Finance faculty. It is near to you home. You can easily take the University Bus to home. You will save time and energy to focus on your studies. The application procedure is simple. You just have to make an account on the University portal and apply for admission online. Once your application is accepted, you will be called for a short interview. I hope my advice fits your needs. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Mehreen

Dear Sam,

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Yours sincerely
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