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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take POxE
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about my discontinuation of the evening course this month. Initially, I thought, I will manage my full-time job along with this course simultaneously however, I am now finding it difficult to carry on. My employer enrolled my name for regulatory training this month, which will take additional time besides normal working hours. This training is mandatory as per industry standards of employment. Although I was attempting to participate in the next batch, in order to continue my evening course, it is not possible because this training needs to be completed earliest. Since job is the primary source of income for me to survive, I must prioritize job responsibilities. Due to the enforcement of my employment standard, I could not postpone this training. I apologize for my absence in the evening class going further. I request you to kindly consider my situation and allow me to continue my missed classes in the next batch. Hopefully, I will make sure in the next batch I would complete the course along with all assignments. Looking forward to your permission. Thanks and Regards, Sara
Dear Sir,

I am writing to inform you about my discontinuation of the evening
course
this month.
Initially
, I
thought
, I will manage my full-time job along with this
course
simultaneously
however
, I am
now
finding it difficult to carry on.

My employer enrolled my name for regulatory training this month, which will take additional time
besides
normal working hours. This training is mandatory as per industry standards of employment. Although I was attempting to participate in the
next
batch, in order to continue my evening
course
, it is not possible
because
this training needs to
be completed
earliest. Since job is the primary source of income for me to survive, I
must
prioritize job responsibilities. Due to the enforcement of my employment standard, I could not postpone this training.

I apologize for my absence in the evening
class
going
further
. I request you to kindly consider my situation and
allow
me to continue my missed classes in the
next
batch.
Hopefully
, I will
make
sure in the
next
batch I would complete the
course
along with all assignments.

Looking forward to your permission.

Thanks and Regards,

Sara
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IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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