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You have a friend who lives in a different country. You will organise a party soon and have thought to use a foreign recipe. Write a letter to the friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing.

You have a friend who lives in a different country. You will organise a party soon and have thought to use a foreign recipe. Write a letter to the friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing. 563LB
Dear Yuki, Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in order to ask for a favour from you. Actually, I need the recipe for Japanese Ramen Noodle Soup from you since I am going to throw a party soon. Of course, this is going to be a very special party since all of my high school friends are going to get together and have a good time while talking about our works and achievements in life for the first time after finishing high school. Anyway, the reason, for which, I am asking for this recipe is that I fell in love with this particular soup after eating it at one of the upscale Japanese restaurants in my country. So, I thought that it just would be a great idea to introduce this awesome and delicious dish, instead of only those food items which we enjoy on a regular basis, to all of my friends at the party, so that I could impress them with my new idea. Please get back to me with the recipe of this awesome soup once you read this letter. Warm wishes, Adam
Dear
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Yuki
,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in order to
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ask for
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favour
from you. Actually, I need the recipe for Japanese Ramen Noodle Soup from you since I am going to throw a party
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soon
.

Of course
, this is going to be a
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very
special party since all of my high school friends are going to
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get
together and have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
time while talking about our works and achievements in life for the
first
time after finishing high school.

Anyway, the reason, for which, I am asking for this recipe is that I fell in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
with this particular soup after eating it at one of the upscale Japanese restaurants in my country.
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So
, I
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thought
that it
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just
would be a great
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idea
to introduce this awesome and delicious dish,
instead
of
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only
those food items which we enjoy on a regular basis, to all of my friends at the party,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I could impress them with my new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
.

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Please
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get
back to me with the recipe of this awesome soup once you read this letter.

Warm wishes,

Adam
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IELTS letter You have a friend who lives in a different country. You will organise a party soon and have thought to use a foreign recipe. Write a letter to the friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing.

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189 words
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