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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her Express your gratitude Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her Express your gratitude Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family BJlQw
Dear John, I'm Ms. Sara, I'm writing this letter to thank you for looking after me when I met with an accident last month. I sincerely thank you for saving me on the accident day, I was gone unconscious on the day Thus my parents have informed me that you took care of me until my parents arrive at the hospital. I was on bed rest for the whole last month and recovered just a week before. I apologize for writing this letter in delay. I wish to invite you to visit our home along with your family for a dinner. Please let me know your comfortable day to have a gathering, I'm looking forward to your visit. Once again, I thank you for the help which you have done to me, during the critical time I had before. It will be great if we had a gathering as earliest. Thanking you, Sara
Dear John,

I'm Ms. Sara, I'm writing this letter to thank you for looking after me when I met with an accident last month. I
sincerely
thank you for saving me on the accident day, I
was gone
unconscious on the day
Thus
my parents have informed me that you took care of me until my parents arrive at the hospital.

I
was on bed rest for the whole last month and recovered
just
a week
before
.
I
apologize for writing this letter in delay.
I
wish to invite you to visit our home along with your family for a dinner.
Please
let
me know your comfortable day to have a gathering, I'm looking forward to your visit.

Once again, I thank you for the
help
which you have done to me, during the critical time I had
before
. It will be great if we had a gathering as earliest.

Thanking you,

Sara

IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her Express your gratitude Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family

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  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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