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Write a letter to manager of the hotel. You have seen an advertisement in the newspaper and interested in one of the job. In your letter:- - Which Job you are looking for? - Explain why you are interested in the job? - Explain what prior experience and skills you have in relation to the position?

Write a letter to manager of the hotel. You have seen an advertisement in the newspaper and interested in one of the job. In your letter: - - Which Job you are looking for? - Explain why you are interested in the job? - Explain what prior experience and skills you have in relation to the position? 6xNpr
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this in regards to the announcement published in newspaper for the vacancies in your hotel. I am a certified hotel management graduate specialising in Managing and organising the whole venture, and would like to apply for the senior trainee’s position in your renowned group. Although I am currently employed with Move and Pick group of companies as the senior management trainee, I would like to express my gratitude to work with your organisation as it is a Multi-National hotel that will give me an opportunity to learn different cultures by being the part of the family. I With 4th year running in the current group, I bear 10 years of extensive experience in the field of hospitality. I am very well versed with the responsibilities as a personnel trainee manager and an award winning candidate based on client satisfaction and staff reviews. I will furnish more details in relation to my duties when we meet in person. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Umaid
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
the announcement published in newspaper for the vacancies in your hotel.

I am a certified hotel management graduate
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specialising
in Managing and
Possible spelling mistake. 'organising' is British English.
organising
the whole venture, and would like to apply for the senior trainee’s position in your renowned group.

Although I am
currently
employed with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Move
and Pick group of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
as the senior management trainee, I would like to express my gratitude to work with your
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.
organisation
as it is a Multi-National hotel that will give me an opportunity to learn
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
cultures by being the part of the family. I

With 4th year running in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
group, I bear 10 years of extensive experience in the field of hospitality. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well versed with the responsibilities as a personnel trainee manager and an
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
award winning
candidate based on client satisfaction and staff reviews. I will furnish more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
in relation to my duties when we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
in person.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully


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Umaid
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IELTS letter Write a letter to manager of the hotel. You have seen an advertisement in the newspaper and interested in one of the job. In your letter: - - Which Job you are looking for? - Explain why you are interested in the job? - Explain what prior experience and skills you have in relation to the position?

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8 paragraphs
172 words
5.5
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