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Hi there, my name is Rasim, today I will write about my application process for UGRAD scholarship. This scholarship gives access the students around the globe to study in America for one or two semesters. The application process consists of three stages. Firstly, you ought to write two essays. You need to illustrate how your leadership skills can affect to your community. And another is optional, I chose the second one that was about the leadership. Besides, there were other documents that I included, such as the copy of my ID, two recommendation letters, etc. In the second stage, as long as I am a good candidate for them, there will be an interview. On the contrary, there is a menace for me not to be selected, due to my age. There was a requirement that I am going to have at least one semester after May, 2022 in the university. As you can see, I will be graduate in May. That is why I dread due to this issue. I hope it will be fine. And finally, if I am successful in the interview, it will be obvious for me to go to the USA. In last stage, I ought to get TOEFL certificate as a proof to study in America. And it will be financed by US Embassy. Right now, I am trying to devour every book, article, online courses to surpass my hard as well as soft skills. I believe that this bunch of work will make me a powerful candidate. I have very good friends, and they helped me in the application process. They were my censors, they were trying to go over my essays as well as gave some opinions. However, overall they liked my essays, and they believe I can go to the USA.
Hi there, my name is
Rasim
,
today
I will write about my application process for
UGRAD
scholarship. This scholarship gives access the students around the globe to study in America for one or two semesters. The application process consists of three stages.

Firstly
, you ought to write two essays. You need to illustrate how your leadership
skills
can affect to your community. And another is optional, I chose the second one that was about the leadership.
Besides
, there were other documents that I included, such as the copy of my ID, two recommendation letters, etc.

In the second stage, as long as I am a
good
candidate for them, there will be an interview.
On the contrary
, there is a menace for me not to
be selected
, due to my age. There was a requirement that I am going to have at least one semester after
May, 2022
in the university. As you can
see
, I will be graduate in May.
That is
why I dread due to this issue. I hope it will be fine.

And
finally
, if I am successful in the interview, it will be
obvious for me
to go to the USA. In last stage, I ought to
get
TOEFL certificate as a proof to study in America. And it will
be financed
by US Embassy.

Right
now
, I am trying to devour every book, article, online courses to surpass my
hard
as well
as soft
skills
. I believe that this bunch of work will
make
me a powerful candidate. I have
very
good
friends, and they
helped
me in the application process. They were my censors, they were trying to go over my essays
as well
as gave
some
opinions.
However
,
overall
they liked my essays, and they believe I can go to the USA.
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IELTS letter The Global Undergraduate Exchange Program

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  American English
5 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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