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You are living in another country and read an article in the magazine regarding your culture. There were some mistakes. Write a letter to the editor to correct 1- what the errors were 2 write correct info 3 suggest another interesting article related to your country

You are living in another country and read an article in the magazine regarding your culture. There were some mistakes. Write a letter to the editor to correct 1- what the errors were 2 write correct info 3 suggest another interesting article related to your country LMQr
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to an article published in your magazine, The Monologue, last Friday, about my home country, India and its culture. I was pleased to see an article discussing the culture of my homeland. However, as I continued reading it, I was disheartened to see the misinformation it contained regarding the cultural emphasis on Hinduism. Along with that, stating that metropolitan cities in India did not have any historic places to visit is incorrect. While reading the article, I came across a section that mentioned how Hinduism is the only religion that is majorly practiced in India. On the contrary, the truth is that India is a diverse democratic country where everyone practices their religious beliefs. Secondly, the article also highlighted that the cities lacked historic spots for visiting and knowing more about the Indian culture. I would like to point out that it is misconstrued information. In reality, historic places like Qutub Minar and Gateway of India are located in two of the biggest cities, Delhi and Mumbai. It would be my polite suggestion to rectify the article and re-publish it at the earliest. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Aarunima.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to an
article
published in your magazine, The Monologue, last Friday, about my home country, India and its culture.

I was
pleased
to
see
an
article
discussing the culture of my homeland.
However
, as I continued reading it, I
was disheartened
to
see
the misinformation it contained regarding the cultural emphasis on Hinduism. Along with that, stating that metropolitan cities in India did not have any historic places to visit is incorrect.

While reading the
article
, I came across a section that mentioned how Hinduism is the
only
religion
that is
majorly
practiced in India.
On the contrary
, the truth is that India is a diverse democratic country where everyone practices their religious beliefs.
Secondly
, the
article
also
highlighted that the cities lacked historic spots for visiting and knowing more about the Indian culture. I would like to point out that it
is misconstrued
information. In reality, historic places like
Qutub
Minar
and Gateway of India
are located
in two of the biggest cities, Delhi and Mumbai.

It would be my polite suggestion to rectify the
article
and re-publish it at the earliest. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Aarunima
.
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IELTS letter You are living in another country and read an article in the magazine regarding your culture. There were some mistakes. Write a letter to the editor to correct 1- what the errors were 2 write correct info 3 suggest another interesting article related to your country

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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