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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there Oke7
Dear Jeete, After having received your letter, I am filled with joy and excitement, knowing that you are moving here to Toronto. I am more than happy to help you settle down here. So the best place to live in Toronto is North york. Not only various grocery shops and convenience stores are located at most of the intersections there, but also many public parks and trails too. The commute is not an issue at all here, as Toronto's transport system is one of the best in the world. TTC buses run very frequently, and not the mention TTC subway, which makes it very convenient to travel from one part of the city to another. In case you are curious to know how you can make new friends, there are also many community centers where you can interact with other members living in the neighborhood. Once again, I am eagerly waiting for you to be here. See you soon. Best Wishes, Deepak Kumar
Dear
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Jeete
,

After having received your letter, I
am filled
with joy and excitement, knowing that you are moving here to Toronto.

I am more than happy to
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help
you settle down here.
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So
the best place to
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live
in Toronto is North
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york
. Not
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only
various grocery shops and convenience stores
are located
at most of the intersections there,
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but
also
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many
public parks and trails too.

The commute is not an issue at all here, as Toronto's transport system is one of the best in the world. TTC buses run
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
frequently
, and not the mention TTC subway, which
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makes
it
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very
convenient to travel from one part of the city to another.

In case you are curious to know how you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
new friends, there are
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
community centers where you can interact with other members living in the neighborhood.

Once again, I am
eagerly
waiting for you to be here.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Best Wishes,

Deepak Kumar

IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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