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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to Explain the reason why you decline the offer 1. Express you gratitude 2. Explain you like your current job very much.

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to Explain the reason why you decline the offer 1. Express you gratitude 2. Explain you like your current job very much. jRoWN
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to apprise you that I am refusing your job offer for the post of Assistant Manager. First of all, I am grateful to you for providing me such lucrative career opportunity in your esteemed organization, nevertheless I regret to inform you that I will not be able to embrace your offer because of the job location. Since I am living on the west verge of the town, your company is situated in the centre of the city which will consume around 2 hours for daily commute and in that case, it will be strenuous for me to fulfill my personal responsibilities. To compound the situation even further, at present, I am highly satisfied with my current job in terms of working environment and pay scale. Moreover, I am expecting phenomenal promotion as I am going to complete 5 years tenure in next month. Owing to these, I am placing your offer on hold and will certainly look forward to work with your company in future. Thank you once again for considering my competency for a valuable position. Yours faithfully, Dhara Soni.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to apprise you that I am refusing your job offer for the post of Assistant Manager.

First of all
, I am grateful to you for providing me such lucrative career opportunity in your esteemed organization,
nevertheless
I regret to inform you that I will not be able to embrace your offer
because
of the job location. Since I am living on the west verge of the town, your
company
is situated
in the
centre
of the city which will consume around 2 hours for daily commute and
in that case
, it will be strenuous for me to fulfill my personal responsibilities.

To compound the situation even
further
, at present, I am
highly
satisfied with my
current
job in terms of working environment and pay scale.
Moreover
, I am expecting phenomenal promotion as I am going to complete 5 years tenure in
next
month.

Owing to these, I am placing your offer on hold and will
certainly
look forward to work with your
company
in future
. Thank you once again for considering my competency for a valuable position.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dhara
Soni
.
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IELTS letter You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to Explain the reason why you decline the offer 1. Express you gratitude 2. Explain you like your current job very much.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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