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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: =>say what job you have applied for =>explain why you want this job =>suggest what information the teacher should include

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: =>say what job you have applied for =>explain why you want this job =>suggest what information the teacher should include wBnG3
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing this letter to seek your assistance pertaining to a reference letter which I require to submit for the new job. To commence, I am Dhara Soni, one of your past student from the academic batch year 2016-2018. Since I have applied for the position of fashion designer in a very prominent boutique of our city named 'Banzer Styles', I request you to provide me a reference letter because it is a part of prerequisite for the job, I have applied for. As you might be aware that Banzer Styles is a epitome of clothing brand for designer ethnic ware, it will be the significant opportunity to embark on my career after completing my deploma course in fashion designing. Moreover, I can acquire pragmatic experience to sharpen my proficiency by working in such esteemed organization. Lastly, besides mentioning the testimony about my character and adroit in reference letter, I will appreciate if you could add my competence, quality of hardwork and punctuality in brief. I look forward to receiving your letter as soon as possible and thank you in advance. Tours faithfully, Dhara Soni.
Dear Sir,

I hope this
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finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing this
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to seek your assistance pertaining to a reference
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which I require
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to submit
for the new job.

To commence, I am
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Dhara
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Soni
, one of your past student from the academic batch year 2016-2018. Since I have applied for the position of fashion designer in a
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very
prominent boutique of our city named '
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Banzer
Styles', I request you to provide me a reference
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letter
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because
it is a part of prerequisite for the job, I have applied for.

As you might be aware that
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Banzer
Styles is
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a
epitome of clothing brand for designer ethnic ware, it will be the significant opportunity to embark on my career after completing my
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deploma
course in fashion designing.
Moreover
, I can acquire pragmatic experience to sharpen my proficiency by working in such esteemed organization.

Lastly
,
besides
mentioning the testimony about my character and adroit in reference
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letter
, I will appreciate if you could
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add
my competence, quality of
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hardwork
and punctuality
in brief
.

I look forward to receiving your
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letter
as
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soon
as possible and thank you in advance.

Tours
faithfully
,

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Soni
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: =>say what job you have applied for =>explain why you want this job =>suggest what information the teacher should include

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