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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to Explain the reason why you decline the offer 1. Express you gratitude 2. Explain you like your current job very much. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir,

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to Explain the reason why you decline the offer 1. Express you gratitude 2. Explain you like your current job very much. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir, WyYM5
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regards to an offer letter for the role "Software Developer" in your company. Thankyou very much for offering me the opportunity to work at TCS, Bangalore. I appreciate the time you spent meeting with me to discuss the job. It was a difficult decision, but I will not be accepting the position. Unfortunately, I have accepted a promotion in my current company which is a good match for my current professional goals. However in my current working place, environment is very good, also the colleagues and managers are very supportive. Although, this office is near to my residence, which reduces the cost of travel and time. I would, again, like to express my gratitude for the offer and my regrets that it did not work out. I wish you and the company well in all future endeavors. Sincerely, Nidhi Agrawal
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter
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with regards to
an offer letter for the role
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Software Developer
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in your
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company
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very
much for offering me the opportunity to work at TCS, Bangalore. I appreciate the time you spent meeting with me to discuss the job. It was a difficult decision,
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but
I will not be accepting the position.

Unfortunately, I have
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accepted
a promotion in my
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current
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company
which is a
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good
match for my
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current
professional goals.
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However
in my
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current
working place, environment is
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very
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good
,
also
the colleagues and managers are
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very
supportive. Although, this office is near to my residence, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduces
the cost of travel and time.

I would, again, like to express my gratitude for the offer and my regrets that it did not work out. I wish you and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
well in all future endeavors.

Sincerely
,
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Nidhi
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Agrawal
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IELTS letter You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to Explain the reason why you decline the offer 1. Express you gratitude 2. Explain you like your current job very much. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir,

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5 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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