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You can no longer attend you gym class next month. Write a letter to your instructor Say what lesson you attend Explain why you can’t go Tell them that you’ll be back soon and say what you have enjoyed about their classes.

You can no longer attend you gym class next month. Write a letter to your instructor Say what lesson you attend Explain why you can’t go Tell them that you’ll be back soon and say what you have enjoyed about their classes. DNoym

Hi Claudia This is Fiona from your Zumba class (the one at the back, who has to sit down sometimes! ). Just a quick note to let you know that I’ll have to miss a few classes in December but will be back in Jan. I’ve really enjoyed coming to your classes every week – it gets me out of the house in the winter and I love the way you just let us do as much as we want without putting pressure on us to get all the complicated moves right. There’s a lovely atmosphere in the class and I’ve been feeling much fitter and healthier since I started going regularly. I’m afraid I won’t be able to come for the rest of the term though – my son’s swimming classes have changed and now they clash with the Zumba timetable. It’s a 30-minute drive, so I won’t make it in time for 7. Luckily it’s only for December, and I’ll definitely be back in January with some New Year Resolutions! Hope you have a great Christmas, See you soon Fiona

Hi Claudia

This is Fiona from your Zumba This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 (the one at the back, who This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 sit down This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
! Loose punctuation mark.apply
)
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 a quick note to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I’ll This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 miss a few You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfamilycollectiondivisionschooldegreeleague
classes
 in December This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 will be back in Jan.

I’ve really
 enjoyed coming to your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfamilycollectiondivisionschooldegreeleague
classes
 every week Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 me out of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 in the winter and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the way you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 us do as much as we want without putting pressure on us to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 all the complicated This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
moves
 right. There’s a lovely atmosphere in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 and I’ve been feeling much fitter and healthier since I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 going regularly
.

I’m afraid I won’t be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 for the rest of the term though Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 my son’s swimming You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfamilycollectiondivisionschooldegreeleague
classes
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 they clash with the Zumba timetable. It’s a 30-minute drive, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I won’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it in time for 7.

Luckily it’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for December, and I’ll definitely be back in January with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 New Year Resolutions!

Hope you have a great Christmas,

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon


Fiona