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You brought some dog food from a store, and it turned out to be the expired one. Write a letter to the store manager about this.

You brought some dog food from a store, and it turned out to be the expired one. Write a letter to the store manager about this. 6xaMx

Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to express my frustration as I have received an expired product from your stock. Last week, I had purchased "Drools" dog food for my dog, and seems like it was expired. The food bag has crossed the date of expiration and I did not realise until after I bought it and had a look at it today. I usually check expiration dates, but as your store was a well-known stock, I trusted you and didn’t check this time. However, your store has broken my trust. As a consumer, I have the right to go to the consumer court and file a complaint against your store, which may lead to the entire store inspection or warnings. My receipt has been attached to this email. I am expecting compensation for the inconvenience that I have suffered and a written promise that such things would never happen again. Yours Faithfully, Annie

Dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to express my frustration as I have received an expired product from your stock. Last week, I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
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 dog food for my dog, and seems like it was expired
.

The food bag has crossed the date of expiration and I did not Possible spelling mistake. 'realise' is British English.realize
realise
 until after I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it and had a look at it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. I usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 expiration dates, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 as your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 was a well-known stock, I trusted you and didn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 this time. However
, your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 has broken my trust. As a consumer, I have the right to go to the consumer court and file a complaint against your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
, which may lead to the entire You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 inspection or warnings.

My receipt has been attached
 to this email. I am expecting compensation for the inconvenience that I have suffered and a written promise that such things would never happen again.

Yours Faithfully
,

Annie