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most memorable holiday trip and it advantages and disadvantages

most memorable holiday trip and it advantages and disadvantages 9LwRw

Dear friends, Thank you so much for the wonderful trip to LasAngels of last week and thanks for sharing amazing photos of our splendid tour. I've been delaying this unprecedented visit to this city for quite a long time. It was you all who made this possible. Thanks again for the holiday and snaps you captured in your digital camera. Actually, I couldn't write this letter when I received the most awaited pictures two days ago, because I have had a walking interview yesterday. In fact, it was a sudden plan that came to my mind when I was looking at the newspaper after returning from the USA excursion. Anyway, you guys have to come to my place and we can spend some quality time together. We would also visit the nearby hot spring and South Korean Cuisine centre to enjoy some delicious meals. You people can decide the date tell me so that I can buy some drinks and snacks in advance to make time more memorable. See you all soon. Sunil

Dear friends,

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 made this possible. Thanks again for the holiday and snaps you captured in your digital camera.

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 delicious meals. You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 drinks and snacks in advance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 time more memorable.

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 you all This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
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Sunil