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While I was travelling from Old Trafford to Stanford Bridge yesterday, I spotted a black leather bag on a seat. As Stanford Bridge was the last station of the train, train got empty and nobody picked it and I realised that someone had forgottem his bag.

While I was travelling from Old Trafford to Stanford Bridge yesterday, I spotted a black leather bag on a seat. As Stanford Bridge was the last station of the train, train got empty and nobody picked it and I realised that someone had forgottem his bag. PVRpB
Dear Smith, I am writing this letter to let you know that I have found your bag on the train and you can collect the same from my home. While I was travelling from Old Trafford to Stanford Bridge yesterday, I spotted a black leather bag on a seat. As Stanford Bridge was the last station of the train, it got empty and nobody picked the bag due to which I realised that someone had forgotten his bag. When I picked the bag, I found that the tag was plastered on it which had the name and address of the owner. After peeking inside, I found some documents related to registration of the car and an iPhone charger. In order to collect the bag, please bring your identity card so that I can verify identity before handling to you. You have to come to my house with address #no 45, High Street, Stanford Bridge, London preferably in the evening tomorrow. Hope you will carry your ID for picking the same. Warm regards, Alex Mathew
Dear Smith,

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on the train and you can collect the same from my home.

While I was travelling from
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Old
Trafford to Stanford Bridge yesterday, I spotted a black leather
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on a seat. As Stanford Bridge was the last station of the train, it
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got
empty and nobody picked the
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bag
due to which I
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realised
that someone had forgotten his bag.

When I picked the
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bag
, I found that the tag
was plastered
on it which had the name and address of the owner. After peeking inside, I found
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some
documents related to registration of the car and an iPhone charger.

In order to collect the
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bag
,
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please
bring your identity card
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so
that I can verify identity
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before
handling to you. You
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have to
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come
to my
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house
with address #no 45, High Street, Stanford Bridge, London
preferably
in the evening tomorrow.

Hope you will carry your ID for picking the same.

Warm regards,

Alex Mathew
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IELTS letter While I was travelling from Old Trafford to Stanford Bridge yesterday, I spotted a black leather bag on a seat. As Stanford Bridge was the last station of the train, train got empty and nobody picked it and I realised that someone had forgottem his bag.

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