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Describe the restaurant. What meal did you have there? Why do you think this restaurant is worth visiting?

Describe the restaurant. What meal did you have there? Why do you think this restaurant is worth visiting? GM90j
Dear Sir I am writing this letter to share the experience of my visit to the Fine Dine restaurant. This restaurant is situated in the centre of New York, near the City shopping complex. It provides a whole gamut of traditional foods to foreign ones under a single roof, which has a very comfortable sitting facility with a great ambience for dining at any time. Talking about the meals, I started with the appetizer that included veg soup with crumbed bread and it was mouthwatering and worth a try. Then, in the main course, I opted for lemon chicken and vegetable stew which were even more delicious. In the end, in deserts, I tasted choco lava which was quite different from all other restaurants and was very appealing. I recommend this restaurant to all the readers because this restaurant not only provides a great quality of food, but also it is affordable for everyone. Apart from this, the hospitality of their staff is very friendly. Yours sincerely Alex Mathew
Dear Sir

I am writing this letter to share the experience of my visit to the Fine Dine restaurant.

This
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restaurant
is situated
in the
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centre
of New York, near the City shopping complex. It provides a whole gamut of traditional foods to foreign ones under a single roof, which has a
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very
comfortable sitting facility with a great ambience for dining at any time.

Talking about the meals, I
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started
with the appetizer that included veg soup with crumbed bread and it was mouthwatering and worth a try. Then, in the main course, I opted for lemon chicken and vegetable stew which were even more delicious. In the
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end
, in deserts, I tasted
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choco
lava which was quite
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different
from all other
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restaurants
and was
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very
appealing.

I recommend this
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restaurant
to all the readers
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because
this
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restaurant
not
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only
provides a great quality of food,
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but
also
it is affordable for everyone. Apart from this, the hospitality of their staff is
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very
friendly.

Yours
sincerely


Alex Mathew

IELTS letter Describe the restaurant. What meal did you have there? Why do you think this restaurant is worth visiting?

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  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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