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Write a letter to your classmate that you have broken your leg - thank him for the card and presents you received - explain what you are doing in your free time - how have you been recovering

Write a letter to your classmate that you have broken your leg - thank him for the card and presents you received - explain what you are doing in your free time - how have you been recovering MmreN
Dear Richard I hope this letter finds you in great health and radiant. I’m thanking you for caring me and I felt glad when I received your card and gift. It was really awesome that you sent me the card also some good quotes were written on it. In addition to it, I liked the teddy which was sent by you because the teddy was a doctor that’s why it influenced me to care for my legs. It’s extremely difficult to pass the time because I lie down on the bed every time as doctor advised me to take rest for few weeks. Also, I don’t only watch the TV whole day but sometimes the snake & ladders game is also played. My legs are being improved now, earlier I was unable to go even for the washroom however, because of bed rest they have been recovered so much. Yesterday, I went for an x ray and the doctor told me that my legs are in good condition now. I hope that you would come in next monthe to meet me. Yours lovingly Elaine.
Dear Richard

I hope this letter finds you in great health and radiant. I’m thanking you for caring me and I felt glad when I received your card and gift.

It was
really
awesome that you
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sent
me the card
also
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some
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good
quotes
were written
on it.
In addition
to it, I liked the teddy which was
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sent
by you
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because
the teddy was a doctor that’s why it influenced me to care for my legs.

It’s
extremely
difficult to pass the time
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because
I lie down on the bed every time as doctor advised me to take rest for few weeks.
Also
, I don’t
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only
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watch
the TV whole day
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but
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sometimes
the snake & ladders game is
also
played.

My legs are being
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improved
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now
, earlier I was unable to go even for the washroom
however
,
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because
of bed rest they have
been recovered
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so
much. Yesterday, I went for an
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x ray
and the doctor
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told
me that my legs are in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
condition
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.

I hope that you would
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come
in
next
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monthe
to
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meet
me.

Yours
lovingly


Elaine.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your classmate that you have broken your leg - thank him for the card and presents you received - explain what you are doing in your free time - how have you been recovering

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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