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TALK ABOUT THE PRODUCT THAT YOU BOUGHT RECENTLY

TALK ABOUT THE PRODUCT THAT YOU BOUGHT RECENTLY PgROJ
Hello everyone, today I'm going to talk about the product I bought recently, it's a set of headphones, I bought it a month ago. I bought it because I love listening to music on the road and before bed. For me, these headsets have a lot of benefits. Firstly, as a wireless headset, it is very easy to use. I can use it anywhere and anytime without fear of inconveniences like other wired headphones. Second, I can use them to learn English. As you know, learning English must practice regularly and regularly. Thanks to these headphones, I learn listening skills very easily, I can practice listening during exercise, cooking, . . . And finally, I use these headphones to relax after a hard working day. I can listen to music, watch movies without being afraid of affecting others. In short, for me this is a good product and I think everyone should buy and use it because of the great benefits it offers.
Hello everyone,
today
I'm going to talk about the product I
bought
recently, it's a set of headphones, I
bought
it a month ago. I
bought
it
because
I
love
listening to music on the road and
before
bed. For me, these headsets have
a lot of
benefits.
Firstly
, as a wireless headset, it is
very
easy to
use
. I can
use
it anywhere and anytime without fear of inconveniences like other wired headphones. Second, I can
use
them to learn English. As you know, learning English
must
practice
regularly
and
regularly
. Thanks to these headphones, I learn listening
skills
very
easily
, I can practice listening during exercise, cooking
, .
.
.
And
finally
, I
use
these headphones to relax after a
hard working
day. I can listen to music,
watch
movies without being afraid of affecting others. In short, for me this is a
good
product and I
think
everyone should
buy
and
use
it
because
of the great benefits it offers.
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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