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TELL ME ABOUT THE PLACE WHERE YOU ARE LIVING

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Hello everyone, my name is Vu and today I will tell you guys about my hometown. I was born in Hanoi and still live there until now. Hanoi is the capital of Vietnam – my country, and located with its cold but so beautiful winter and a thousand years of history. It will be very difficult to describe, but undeniable, that who has arrived and stay here through the winter will definitely not forget. There are many ways to travel around Hanoi, but I think the best way is by bus and especially with some friends. After a bus, you can walk around the Hoan Kiem Lake or find a small sidewalk shop in the old town to enjoy the wonderful food. As a child of this city, I also love it so much too. But there are also things that I dislike, like: the noisy, messy traffic or polluted air. All are huge minus points that Hanoi needs to improve. By the way, for me Hanoi is always the place I love and miss the most.
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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