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You bought a phone from your local shop. However, it didn't work properly. Write a complaint letter to the shop manager.

You bought a phone from your local shop. However, it didn't work properly. Write a complaint letter to the shop manager. 7aO5b
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the phone which I bought from your store located at Istiklol Street. Unfortunately, the phone's energy is not enough for a day but you persuaded me that it's quality was the best one. Not only it's energy but also it's camera is very dim, because of it is not easy to see pictures. This is not a phone what you showed me. It was a very perfect and the last model of Galaxy company. I hhave been a loyal customer of your store for more than two years and I have always been perfectly satisfied and happy with my purchase. This is the first time something like this has happened with one of your products. I amm hoping that you may be able to change my phone into another one or refund my money. Please contact me as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Mrs Usmonova.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the phone which I
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bought
from your store located at
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Istiklol
Street.

Unfortunately, the phone's energy is not
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enough
for a day
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but
you persuaded me that it's quality was the best one. Not
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only
it's energy
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but
also
it's camera is
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very
dim,
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because
of it is not easy to
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see
pictures. This is not a phone what you
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showed
me.

It was a
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very
perfect and the last model of Galaxy
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company
. I
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hhave
been a loyal customer of your store for more than two years and I have always been
perfectly
satisfied and happy with my
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purchase
. This is the
first
time something like this has happened
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with
one of your products.

I
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amm
hoping that you may be able to
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change
my phone into another one or refund my money.

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Please
contact me as
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soon
as possible.

Yours
faithfully


Mrs
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Usmonova
.

IELTS letter You bought a phone from your local shop. However, it didn't work properly. Write a complaint letter to the shop manager.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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