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You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to hime/her. In your letter: apologize for the mistake find out how important the book is to him/her say what you will do Write at least 150 words.

You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to hime/her. In your letter: apologize for the mistake find out how important the book is to him/her say what you will do 0AwAO
Dear Hannah, I am writing regarding the textbook I borrowed from you for our last term in class. Our common friend Billy told me today that you left the country. The book is still with me and I am very sorry that I couldn't manage to give it back to you before your leave to your home country. I know how important this book was for your summer revisions. As I mentioned, I wasn't aware that you were leaving this early, otherwise I would have definitely given it back to you. To better the situation and since you need the textbook so that you get prepared for your summer exam, I think it would be best to send it via mail. I'll choose the fastest delivery option as a sign of my pity. Please write back to me with your current postal address so that I proceed with the delivery. I hope for your understanding. Warm regards, Mariam
Dear Hannah,

I am writing regarding the textbook I borrowed from you for our last term in
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Our common friend Billy
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me
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that you
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left
the country. The book is
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sorry that I couldn't manage to give it back to you
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before
your
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leave
to your home country. I know how
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important
this book was for your summer revisions. As I mentioned, I wasn't aware that you were leaving this early,
otherwise
I would have definitely
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given
it back to you.

To better the situation and since you need the textbook
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so
that you
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get
prepared for your summer exam, I
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think
it would be best to
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send
it via mail. I'll choose the fastest delivery option as a
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sign
of my pity.
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Please
write back to me with your
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current
postal address
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so
that I proceed with the delivery.

I hope for your understanding.

Warm regards,

Mariam

IELTS letter You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to hime/her. In your letter: apologize for the mistake find out how important the book is to him/her say what you will do

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157 words
6.0
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