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Letter to the clubhouse for membership closure

Letter to the clubhouse for membership closure PgoJE
Dear Mr Shaikh, The facilities in the A1 club are good and up to high standards. We are a group of 5 friends who are using this facility. It has been a boost to people in the vicinity to focus on health. I have enrolled for an annual membership. My membership includes gym and swimming. The gym tools consisting of all the weights and a personal trainer has been beneficial for me to develop my body structure. During the last year, I have been a member. It has helped me to develop my body structure and keep a check on my weights. I learnt my swimming in the club: the pool size is ideal for learning; however, including weekdays for gym members will be advantageous. As much as the last year has been good, I regret to inform you that I want to discontinue my membership. I am moving out of my current apartment: due to the proximity of my new house, I will not be able to come here. I am sure I will join back the day I move back in this vicinity. Your’s Sincerely, Sandesh D’Souza
Dear Mr Shaikh,

The facilities in the A1 club are
good
and up to high standards. We are a group of 5 friends who are using this facility. It has been a boost to
people
in the vicinity to focus on health.

I have enrolled for an annual membership. My membership includes gym and swimming. The gym tools consisting of all the weights and a personal trainer has been beneficial for me to develop my body structure.

During the last year, I have been a member. It has
helped
me to develop my body structure and
keep
a
check
on my weights. I
learnt
my swimming in the club: the pool size is ideal for learning;
however
, including weekdays for gym members will be advantageous.

As much as the last year has been
good
, I regret to inform you that I want to discontinue my membership. I am moving out of my
current
apartment: due to the proximity of my new
house
, I will not be able to
come
here.

I am sure I will
join
back the day I
move
back in this vicinity.

Your’s
Sincerely
,

Sandesh
D’Souza
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IELTS letter Letter to the clubhouse for membership closure

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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