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Complain letter to hotel manager or director

Complain letter to hotel manager or director GNjeL
Dear SirI am writing to a letter to complain about your hotel's cooling system. After long hours working as usual l went to the hotel. At the beginning of my business trip l want to stay with my friends but l would prefer to stay in hotel. But your hotel was inadequate but l haven't any way because my friend had gone abroad before l came here. l am fulfilled from the hotel. As you know, the weather of our country is somehow unusual. Especially, the winter days are not cimfortable for me. One night the room was very cold. Even the windows of the inn was frozen completaly. there is some inflammation on my face. Naturally, l endeavoured to make a warmer. the thermometr on the wall was showing very low temperatura. l tried to switch on my own electricity oven but it wasn't effective as my dreamt. Suddenly the room was fulled with sone kind of smell and that was the smell of burning. Due to working under low pressure, cabels were burning. in the beginning l didn't do anything and called for assistant. As you think. the ending of my night may be very tragic if l didn't feel as soon as l had awaken. At the ending of my letter l was going to tell you that to b e very comfortable. legible. adequate. luxurious your hotel. That wad my first visiting but l look forward to be very class your hotel's cooling system Iwill come again soon Your sincerely.
Dear
SirI
am
writing to a letter to complain about your hotel's cooling system.
After
long hours working as usual l went to the
hotel
. At the beginning of my business trip l want to stay with my friends
but
l would prefer to stay in
hotel
.
But
your
hotel
was inadequate
but
l haven't any way
because
my friend had gone abroad
before
l came here.
l
am fulfilled
from the
hotel
. As you know, the weather of our country is somehow unusual.
Especially
, the winter days are not
cimfortable
for me. One night the room was
very
cold
. Even the windows of the inn
was frozen
completaly
.
there
is
some
inflammation on my face.
Naturally
, l
endeavoured
to
make
a warmer.
the
thermometr
on the wall was showing
very
low
temperatura
.
l
tried to switch on my
own
electricity oven
but
it wasn't effective as my dreamt.
Suddenly
the room
was fulled
with
sone
kind of smell and that was the smell of burning. Due to working under low pressure,
cabels
were burning.
in
the beginning l didn't do anything and called for assistant. As you
think
.
the
ending of my night may be
very
tragic if l didn't feel as
soon
as l had
awaken
. At the ending of my letter l was going to
tell
you that to b e
very
comfortable.
legible
.
adequate
.
luxurious
your
hotel
. That wad my
first
visiting
but
l look forward
to be
very
class
your hotel's cooling system
Iwill
come
again
soon


Your
sincerely
.
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IELTS letter Complain letter to hotel manager or director

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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