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Formal Letter to the community center

Formal Letter to the community center qLXP5

Dear Sir or Madam, This well-considered letter regards your erroneous thought towards shutting the doors of our regional My parents anguish from diabetes. They use the center for their morning walks, followed by a fellowship with people of their age group. My wife and her friends have a weekly Zumba session in the center. My elder daughter uses the swimming facilities as she is practising for the state championships. The center helps the neighbourhood people to stay healthy and fit, especially people with health conditions, like my parents. As people use the facility, they meet and greet. It aids to build a friend circle and their social life. It also encourages the community to prepare themselves for competitive sports. It will lead to people losing focus on fitness and developing an illness. Some of them will further have to spend more money looking at alternatives affecting them financially. The social circle built will be disturbed. It will discourage kids from developing their skills. With all this in mind, I request you to not windup the center; and continue to stay invested. It will be beneficial for the community. Your’s faithfully, Sandesh D’Souza

Dear Sir or Madam,

This well-considered letter regards your erroneous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 towards shutting the doors of our regional

My parents anguish from diabetes. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the center for their morning walks, followed by a fellowship with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 of their age group. My wife and her friends have a weekly Zumba session in the center. My elder daughter This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
 the swimming facilities as she is Possible spelling mistake. 'practising' is British English.practicing
practising
 for the state championships.

The center This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 the Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to stay healthy and fit, especially
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 with health conditions, like my parents. As You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the facility, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 and greet. It aids to build a friend circle and their social life. It also
 encourages the community to prepare themselves for competitive sports.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
It
 will lead to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 losing focus on fitness and developing an illness. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of them will further
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 spend more money looking at alternatives affecting them financially
. The social circle built will be disturbed
. It will discourage kids from developing their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
.

With all this in mind, I request you to not windup the center; and continue to stay invested. It will be beneficial for the community.

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Your’s
faithfully
,

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