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Dear Madam, I am one of the participants of the course First Aid Skills that will take place next week at your university. Currently I am planning my visit and I need to settle some questions related to it. I am writing to inquire about accommodation available for participants of the course. Since I have already booked my tickets I can provide you with dates of my visit. I am arriving on the 2rd of June in the afternoon and I am going to stay 4 nights. I would like to stay in a single room with a private bathroom in the premises within walking distance to the University. In case it is not possible, I can consider sharing a room with any other participant of the course, but not far from the location where the course will take place. Please, send me information on prices for rooms and methods of payment. I prefer to pay by credit card during check in and can make a prepayment to ensure my booking. Since I have never been to your city, I would appreciate it if you provide me with information on how I can get from the railway station to the University.
Dear Madam,

I am one of the participants of the
course
First
Aid
Skills
that will take place
next
week at your university.
Currently
I am planning my visit and I need to settle
some
questions related to it. I am writing to inquire about accommodation available for participants of the
course
.
Since
I have already booked my tickets I can provide you with dates of my visit. I am arriving on the
2rd
of June in the
afternoon and
I am going to stay 4 nights. I would like to stay in a single room with a private bathroom in the premises within walking distance to the University. In case it is not possible, I can consider sharing a room with any other participant of the
course
,
but
not far from the location where the
course
will take place.
Please
,
send
me information on prices for rooms and methods of payment.

I prefer to pay by credit card during
check
in and can
make
a prepayment to ensure my booking. Since I have never been to your city, I would appreciate it if you provide me with information on how I can
get
from the railway station to the University.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to accommodation officer

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
201 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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