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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

Dear Mr. Walker, I am writing to express interest in a job opening of for Quality Assurance Manager, which I came across on the notice board this morning. I have done my bachelors in Business administration. To further my education and attain professional skills, I am currently pursuing masters in the same field along with thesis work on how to market and create quality goods. From the job posting, it seems to me having a relevant work experience in the retail domain would be advantageous. My work experience has a store manager with Express clothing helped me involved in various responsibilities like operations, training new employees, creating business strategies, quality checks, developing new promotional ideas. Contemplating my educations and work experience, I feel I could be a good fit for this role. Thank you for your considerations in advance, I also would like to let you know my availability for an interview is very flexible with a short notice. Yours sincerely Mike
Dear Mr. Walker,

I am writing to express interest in a job opening of for Quality Assurance Manager, which I came across on the notice board this morning.

I have done my bachelors in Business administration. To
further
my education and attain professional
skills
, I am
currently
pursuing masters in the same field along with thesis
work
on how to market and create quality
goods
.

From the job posting, it seems to me having a relevant
work
experience in the retail domain would be advantageous. My
work
experience has a store manager with Express clothing
helped
me involved in various responsibilities like operations, training new employees, creating business strategies, quality
checks
, developing new promotional
ideas
. Contemplating my educations and
work
experience, I feel I could be a
good
fit for this role.

Thank you for your considerations in advance, I
also
would like to
let
you know my availability for an interview is
very
flexible with a short notice.

Yours
sincerely


Mike
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IELTS letter You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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