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There is a new ready-mixed concrete (RMC) plant installed nearby your home and it causes various types of pollutions. Write a letter to City Council for a removal request. In your letter • describe who you are • explain what troubles you by existence of this RMC plant • tell what you want the officer to do for you

There is a new ready-mixed concrete (RMC) plant installed nearby your home and it causes various types of pollutions. Write a letter to City Council for a removal request. In your letter • describe who you are • explain what troubles you by existence of this RMC plant • tell what you want the officer to do for you MoXGa
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Smith, and I reside at Green Avenue E, WestGate ON. I have been living there for the past 4 years. I am writing this letter to show my disappointment regarding the installation of a new ready- mixed concrete plant near my apartment. Let me elaborate on the situation. When the machinery starts, it generates so much noise pollution because of it I am unable to focus on my studies also facing a sleeping disorder problem. Moreover, it creates massive air pollution which does not let me stand on my balconies; In addition, I have to wear a mask whenever I am required to go outside. All types of these pollutants have threatened my peace of mind. It is a clear administrative blunder of the City Council by authorizing this industrial plant in the residential vicinity. Considering the gravity of the matter, I would request you to shift this RMC plant with immediate effect. I solicit your cooperation. My coordinate is (555) 456 982, and my email address is smith@xyz. com. Yours Faithfully, Smith.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Smith, and I reside at Green Avenue E,
WestGate
ON. I have been living there for the past 4 years. I am writing this letter to
show
my disappointment regarding the installation of a new ready- mixed concrete plant near my apartment.

Let
me elaborate on the situation. When the machinery
starts
, it generates
so
much noise pollution
because
of it I am unable to focus on my studies
also
facing a sleeping disorder problem.
Moreover
, it creates massive air pollution which does not
let
me stand on my balconies;
In addition
, I
have to
wear a mask whenever I
am required
to go outside. All types of these pollutants have threatened my peace of mind.

It is a
clear
administrative blunder of the City Council by authorizing this industrial plant in the residential vicinity. Considering the gravity of the matter, I would request you to shift this RMC plant with immediate effect.

I solicit your cooperation. My coordinate is (555) 456 982, and my email address is
smith@xyz
.
com
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Smith.
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IELTS letter There is a new ready-mixed concrete (RMC) plant installed nearby your home and it causes various types of pollutions. Write a letter to City Council for a removal request. In your letter • describe who you are • explain what troubles you by existence of this RMC plant • tell what you want the officer to do for you

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