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insurance coverage for the wristwatch GrPBw
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to claim the insurance coverage for the wristwatch that I lost on my trip to Korea last October. About my wristwatch, it is a round-shaped Versace women’s watch containing Sapphire Crystal, come along with a blue leather strap band which is 7. 5 inches long and 18mm wide. I bought it for $624. 99. On October 29, I attended a concert at the Seoul Olympic Stadium, between 6pm and 11pm. I still see my wristwatch before the concert, but when I left the stadium I realized it was gone, so I am pretty sure I lost it here. I immediately went back the stadium to search for my wristwatch and reported to the local police later. Unfortunately, I could not find it again. Based on my travel insurance contract with your company, I believe I am entitled to make a claim for the value of my wristwatch. Please send me details on what I need to do to proceed. Yours faithfully, Dang Anh.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to claim the insurance coverage for the
wristwatch
that I lost on my trip to Korea last October.

About my
wristwatch
, it is a round-shaped Versace women’s
watch
containing Sapphire Crystal,
come
along with a blue leather strap band which is 7.
5 inches
long and
18mm
wide. I
bought
it for $624. 99.

On October 29, I attended a concert at the Seoul Olympic Stadium, between 6pm and 11pm. I
still
see
my
wristwatch
before
the concert,
but
when I
left
the stadium I realized it
was gone
,
so
I am pretty sure I lost it here. I immediately went back the stadium to search for my
wristwatch
and reported to the local police later. Unfortunately, I could not find it again.

Based on my travel insurance contract with your
company
, I believe I
am entitled
to
make
a claim for the value of my
wristwatch
.
Please
send
me
details
on what I need to do to proceed.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dang
Anh
.
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IELTS letter insurance coverage for the wristwatch

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  American English
7 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
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