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insurance coverage for the wristwatch

insurance coverage for the wristwatch GrPBw
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to claim the insurance coverage for the wristwatch that I lost on my trip to Korea last October. About my wristwatch, it is a round-shaped Versace women’s watch containing Sapphire Crystal, come along with a blue leather strap band which is 7. 5 inches long and 18mm wide. I bought it for $624. 99. On October 29, I attended a concert at the Seoul Olympic Stadium, between 6pm and 11pm. I still see my wristwatch before the concert, but when I left the stadium I realized it was gone, so I am pretty sure I lost it here. I immediately went back the stadium to search for my wristwatch and reported to the local police later. Unfortunately, I could not find it again. Based on my travel insurance contract with your company, I believe I am entitled to make a claim for the value of my wristwatch. Please send me details on what I need to do to proceed. Yours faithfully, Dang Anh.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to claim the insurance coverage for the
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wristwatch
that I lost on my trip to Korea last October.

About my
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wristwatch
, it is a round-shaped Versace women’s
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watch
containing Sapphire Crystal,
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come
along with a blue leather strap band which is 7.
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5 inches
long and
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18mm
wide. I
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bought
it for $624. 99.

On October 29, I attended a concert at the Seoul Olympic Stadium, between 6pm and 11pm. I
still
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see
my
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wristwatch
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before
the concert,
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but
when I
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left
the stadium I realized it
was gone
,
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so
I am pretty sure I lost it here. I immediately went back the stadium to search for my
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wristwatch
and reported to the local police later. Unfortunately, I could not find it again.

Based on my travel insurance contract with your
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company
, I believe I
am entitled
to
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make
a claim for the value of my
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wristwatch
.
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Please
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send
me
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details
on what I need to do to proceed.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dang
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Anh
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IELTS letter insurance coverage for the wristwatch

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7 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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