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Dear Director, I am Flavia Carrillo truyenque. I am study Communications in our college. In this day i would like you explain my requirement. I have listened that now the apartament of first aid is open and they are accepting new studens por these months. A few year ago, I have had the encougare to study other ability to do better my knowledges not only related a communications but also skills that helping an others. As you know, my wish is be able to study that course, but the schedule do not allow me working at the same time and it could be very difficult for me otherwise i will be able to take those classes and I am be honest, I belive I would try to take the better notes is class. I Know that if i do not take classes, i will not receive a certification. Now i would like to know What options do I have to receive the certificate or if I can do some other activity that helps to obtain it. Finally, I am ready to serve our college. I await your response director. Your student, Flavia

Dear Director,

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Your student,

Flavia