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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away RrgG

Dear Rose I am writing to request some unpaid leave next month. My parents’ 50th wedding anniversary is on April 21st, and they are planning to celebrate this significant achievement with all their children and grandchildren. To do this, they have rented a house big enough to accommodate the whole family. To participate in this special occasion, I would need to be away from work for four days, from Monday 19th to Thursday 23rd. My schedule for that week is relatively light, apart from two meetings with clients. Helen would be able to attend these in my place, as she has had previous dealings with both companies and knows the relevant staff there. I have no other urgent work commitments at that time. I would be very grateful if you could allow me this time. These few days are very important to my parents and the whole family, and it would be a way to thank them for all the support they have given me. Best wishes

Dear Rose

I am writing to request This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 unpaid This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
next
 month.

My parents’ 50th wedding anniversary is on April 21st, and they are planning to celebrate this significant achievement with all their children and grandchildren. To do this, they have rented a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to accommodate the whole family.

To participate in this special occasion, I would need to be away from work for four days, from Monday 19th to Thursday 23rd. My schedule for that week is relatively
 light, apart from two meetings with clients. Helen would be able to attend these in my place, as she has had previous dealings with both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 and knows the relevant staff there. I have no other urgent work commitments at that time.

I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me this time. These few days are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to my parents and the whole family, and it would be a way to thank them for all the support they have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 me.

Best wishes

IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

166 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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