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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away 5Dqp

we are going to birthdat party of my friend. so, i cannot come for one month, please give me leave for one month so that i can spend time with my children and i can enjoy my life. i think it is better way to give time to children and also to family. so i need leave for one month. Nilesh is my colleague he has experience about my work and can handle all tasks easily. as in any difficulty he can handle every situation properly.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 are going to Possible spelling mistake found.birthdaybirthdate
birthdat
 party of my friend. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 for one month, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 give me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 for one month This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can spend time with my children and Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can enjoy my life. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is Please check whether an article is missing: "a better".a better
better
 way to give time to children and also
 to family. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 need This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 for one month. Nilesh is my colleague he has experience about my work and can handle all tasks easily
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAs
as
 in any difficulty he can handle every situation properly
. 

IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

86 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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