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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away 5Dqp
we are going to birthdat party of my friend. so, i cannot come for one month, please give me leave for one month so that i can spend time with my children and i can enjoy my life. i think it is better way to give time to children and also to family. so i need leave for one month. Nilesh is my colleague he has experience about my work and can handle all tasks easily. as in any difficulty he can handle every situation properly.
we
are going to
birthdat
party of my friend.
so
,
i
cannot
come
for one month,
please
give me
leave
for one month
so
that
i
can spend time with my children and
i
can enjoy my life.
i
think
it is
better
way to give time to children and
also
to family.
so
i
need
leave
for one month. Nilesh is my colleague he has experience about my work and can handle all tasks
easily
.
as
in any difficulty he can handle every situation
properly
.
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IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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