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You are arranging a dinner party. Write a letter to your friend to invite him or her to the party. Say why you are holding it and give the necessary details.

You are arranging a dinner party. Write a letter to your friend to invite him or her to the party. Say why you are holding it and give the necessary details. 8DrV
Dear Susan, How are you? I haven’t seen you for a while. Hope all is well. Anyway, I’m writing because I’m inviting some friends over for dinner next Friday and I’ll be so glad if you can come too. The party will be held at my new home. You know, I bought a house last year and it was renovated recently. Today is my first day living in this new house and I want you to come and share my gladness. The dinner will start at 6pm next Friday( April 3, 2021), and the address is as follows: 23 White Road, Flat Bush. You might want to know that Tom is coming too. I know you two haven’t seen each other for a long time, so there must be a lot to say then. After dinner, we can drink, dance or play poker, whatever you want. Oh, I have two spare rooms and you’re welcome to stay for the night if you wish. So, let me know if you can make it. Take care and see you soon. Mia
Dear Susan,

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April 3, 2021), and the address is as follows: 23 White Road, Flat Bush.

You might want to
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that Tom is coming too. I
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you two haven’t
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each other for a long time,
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be a lot to say then. After dinner, we can drink, dance or play poker, whatever you want. Oh, I have two spare rooms and you’re welcome to stay for the night if you wish.

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Take care and
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Mia
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IELTS letter You are arranging a dinner party. Write a letter to your friend to invite him or her to the party. Say why you are holding it and give the necessary details.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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