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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of the amount of time you need • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of the amount of time you need • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away 3DQJ
Respected sir, I hope that everything will be ok. I am working as a supervisor in your company from last five years. I am passing through bad period of time due to my father have serious injury on his leg. So, I want to take leave for one month from my work because no one is other at home to take care of him. As his appointed doctor asked to rest and stay at bed for at least 30 days to cue the injury so I need leave for a month so that I can take care of him properly and this will help them to recover quickly from the injury. my colleague Mahesh is also do same duties as me so, he can cover my duties as well as nowadays his working side is slow due to this, he can manage it quickly. Waiting ahead for your reply. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Ram.
Respected sir,

I hope that everything will be ok. I am working as a supervisor in your
company
from last five years.
I
am passing through
bad
period of time due to my father have serious injury on his leg.
So
, I want to take
leave
for one month from my work
because
no one is other at home to take care of him.

As his appointed doctor asked to rest and stay at bed for at least 30 days to cue the injury
so
I need
leave
for a month
so
that I can take care of him
properly
and this will
help
them to recover
quickly
from the injury.

my
colleague Mahesh is
also
do
same duties as me
so
, he can cover my duties
as well
as nowadays his working side is slow due to this, he can manage it
quickly
.

Waiting ahead for your reply.

Thank you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Ram.
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IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of the amount of time you need • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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