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You are working an a company. You would like to join q training coursa related to your work.

You are working an a company. You would like to join q training coursa related to your work. nVQaR

Dear Madam, I am a staff of your company. I glad to work here also thank you for constitute lots of opportunities. I am sure it will show its good result to you in near future. If I am not mistaken we should develop our business skills more and more therefor I would like to help this work and I am going to improve my business experiences through joining a course which related to my job. I hope thereafter we will achieve outcome soon. I find this course benefitial for me, not only this it will make me successful on our work. The way I see to achieve result, we should enhance time of course. Considering all of them, I suggest that I should begin it from next week. I offer so because, gennerally speaking, we have moving upwards and our company become rich and famous. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, Alina Granger

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company
. Did you mean "I am"?I am
I
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show
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good
 result to you in near future. If I am not mistaken we should develop our business This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
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help
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work and
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improve
 my business experiences through joining a course which related to my job. I hope thereafter we will achieve outcome This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. I find this course Possible spelling mistake found.beneficial
benefitial
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only
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make
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see
 to achieve result, we should enhance time of course
. Considering all of them, I suggest that I should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 it from next
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so
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because
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gennerally
 speaking, we have moving upwards and our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 become rich and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully
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