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You are going to travel to your friend's town. You should ask him some information about the town.

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Dear Susan, How are you? I hope you are well. I am so sorry for not writing sooner but I was busy with my CEFR exams I really have not had a suitable opportunity. Our school staff is planning a trip to your town next month. I want you to give me some information about your native town. To be honest, we are going there for a weekend holiday. That's why my colleagues want to know the best places in your area to have a rest. In addition that, we are going to stay in "Grand Hotel" which is the most up to date hotel in your country. Also, I want to know what it costs there to hire a single room for two days. Finally, can you tell me some more about places where we can spend our two days exciting. I hope you can help me with these details. Please let me know as soon as possible you can. Love, Angie.

Dear Susan,

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