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You are unable to attend to your friends wedding in the greeting in this letter tell her what you think about her wedding plan. apologize for not attending suggest date for future meeting

Dear Amaya, Hope this letter finds in rediant and health and this best of spirits. It was such a pleasant surprise when I receive your wedding card today afternoon. However, my dear friend I can’t attend your wedding as I am going to London on 27th march. You are going to declaration with the green flowers and you will be wear green dress. When I have read it about your plan, really I feel extremely happy as it is a good message for people to keep environment clean. I am really sorry I shall not attend wedding as I am going to London for office conference. But, I have a suggestion you can come Kolkata of our honeymoon, which is very wonderful place. Besides that, that if you will come on 20th July. We self spend time together as I sell vac from London on 20 June. Please consider this the disposal proposal. I wish you are very long and happy married life. Hoping to see you soon. Your lovingly, Raman
Dear
Amaya
, Hope this letter finds in
rediant
and health and this best of spirits. It was such a pleasant surprise when I receive your wedding card
today afternoon
.
However
, my dear friend I can’t attend your wedding as I am going to London on 27th march. You are going to declaration with the green flowers and you will be wear green dress. When I have read it about your plan,
really
I feel
extremely
happy as it is a
good
message for
people
to
keep
environment clean. I am
really
sorry I shall not attend wedding as I am going to London for office conference.
But
, I have a suggestion you can
come
Kolkata of our honeymoon, which is
very
wonderful place.
Besides
that, that if you will
come
on 20th July.
We self
spend time together as I sell vac from London on 20 June.
Please
consider this the disposal proposal. I wish you are
very
long and happy married life. Hoping to
see
you
soon
. Your
lovingly
,
Raman
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IELTS letter You are unable to attend to your friends wedding in the greeting in this letter tell her what you think about her wedding plan. apologize for not attending suggest date for future meeting

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  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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