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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter.

Dear Rere, Thank you for your acceptance! I hope you’ll enjoy to look after my house and pet when I go to holiday. You can contact me, if there area many problems in my house, and I’ll be staying at Lalala Hotel 16th floor in Busan. Also, I’ve written my numbers on yellow sticky note that I put on the fridge. My dogs need to be fed three times daily like us, and in those spare time should be given small meals that I put it beside the fridge. Please check the kennel and make sure my dogs get clean conditions. I know you’re keen on to maintain my dogs, so it’s piece of cake to bring them trained swimming. I would like you to dump trash on the basket every single morning because truck bring garbage through the house at 06. 00 a. m. Finally, please give the water for my plants, and make sure my dogs don’t play around my plants. I look forward to seeing you when I’m come back. Your bestfriend, Laura
Dear
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Rere
,

Thank you for your acceptance! I hope you’ll enjoy to look after my
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house
and pet when I
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go to holiday
.

You can contact me, if
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there area
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many
problems in my
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house
, and I’ll be staying at
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Lalala
Hotel 16th floor in
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Busan
.
Also
, I’ve written my numbers on yellow sticky note that I put on the fridge.

My
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dogs
need to
be fed
three times daily like us, and in those spare time should be
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given
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small
meals that I put it beside the fridge.
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Please
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check
the kennel and
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make
sure my
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dogs
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get
clean conditions. I know you’re keen on to maintain my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dogs
,
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so
it’s piece of cake to bring them trained swimming.

I would like you to dump trash on the basket every single morning
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because
truck bring garbage through the
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house
at 06. 00 a. m.
Finally
,
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please
give the water for my plants, and
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make
sure my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dogs
don’t play around my plants.

I look forward to seeing you when I’m
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come
back.

Your
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bestfriend
,

Laura
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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