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You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say where and when the class will be held • give reasons why you think your friend might be interested • suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea

Dear Rozmeen, I am delighted to share an exciting opportunity with you regarding cooking classes. As per the schedule, the classes will commence from the next week. It will be on every alternate day for 2 weeks and will be conducted at arts class of Delhi college. It will be a great opportunity for both of us to take this class together. You have always been fond of watching cooking videos and I remember you used to try new recipes back in the school time and it tasted very delicious. Also, you told me once that you are planning to pursue your career in the same field. I think you might be interested in joining the classes to get more expertise. Let’s meet tomorrow at 09: 00 pm after your language class at my place to discuss about it in detail. I have asked one of my friends to share all the information about the classes including admission criteria and fee structure. Waiting to catch up with you soon! Best wishes! Farida
Dear
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Rozmeen
,

I
am delighted
to share an exciting opportunity with you regarding cooking classes.

As per the schedule, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
will commence from the
next
week. It will be on every alternate day for 2 weeks and will
be conducted
at arts
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class
of Delhi college. It will be a great opportunity for both of us to take this
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class
together.

You have always been fond of watching cooking videos and I remember you
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used
to try new recipes back in the school time and it tasted
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very
delicious.
Also
, you
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told
me once that you are planning to pursue your career in the same field. I
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think
you might
be interested
in joining the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more expertise.

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Let
’s
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meet
tomorrow at 09: 00 pm after your language
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class
at my place to
Did you mean simply "discuss it"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discuss about it
in detail. I have asked one of my friends to share all the information about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
including admission criteria and fee structure.

Waiting to catch up with you
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soon
!

Best wishes!

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Farida

IELTS letter You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say where and when the class will be held • give reasons why you think your friend might be interested • suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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