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You are travelling next month to stay with a family you do not know as part of a language training course. Write a letter to the family to introduce yourself. In your letter say when and how you will be arriving, tell the family a little about yourself, ask about the type of food that the family eats.

You are travelling next month to stay with a family you do not know as part of a language training course. Write a letter to the family to introduce yourself. In your letter say when and how you will be arriving, tell the family a little about yourself, ask about the type of food that the family eats. M3dEQ
Dear Mr Greene, How are you and your entire family? I do hope you are doing great as always. I am so sorry that l haven't spoken to you since our last discussion. I hardly have a minute to myself due to my hectic work schedule. The purpose of this missive is to inform you that l will be artiving in Toronto next week to study a language training course( spanish precisely). My name is Ella Juridis, originally l am from New york and in my late 40's. My hobbies includes meeting people, travelling, l like to explore different fascinating places. To be honest, l'd like to lnow the type of food the family eats because l am more of a vegetarian, like eating lots of fresh vegetables, diary milk, nuts, salmon etc. Would you be kind enough to inform me about your food pattern? I will appreciate that a lot. Further interaction with your family will be an icing on the cake. Best Wishes, Ella Juridis.
Dear Mr Greene,

How are you and your entire family? I do hope you are doing great as always. I am
so
sorry that l haven't spoken to you since our last discussion.
I
hardly have a minute to myself due to my hectic work schedule.

The purpose of this missive is to inform you that l will be
artiving
in Toronto
next
week to study a language training course
(
spanish
precisely
). My name is Ella
Juridis
,
originally
l am from
New york
and in my late
40's
. My hobbies
includes
meeting
people
, travelling, l like to explore
different
fascinating places.

To be honest, l'd like to
lnow
the type of food the family eats
because
l am more of a vegetarian, like eating lots of fresh vegetables, diary milk, nuts, salmon etc. Would you be kind
enough
to inform me about your food pattern? I will appreciate that a lot.

Further
interaction with your family will be an icing on the cake.

Best Wishes,

Ella
Juridis
.
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IELTS letter You are travelling next month to stay with a family you do not know as part of a language training course. Write a letter to the family to introduce yourself. In your letter say when and how you will be arriving, tell the family a little about yourself, ask about the type of food that the family eats.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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