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Complaint to builder about the recent renovation

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Dear sir, I am writing to complain against the recent construction done by your organisation at my office building. A contract regarding a 1000 square feet branch of Axis Bank Ltd. was signed with you which held the making of cash counter, branch head's cabin with three other cabins beside this, a pantry, vault, store room, rest room and a sitting area. As per commercial building norms of local authorities it was also adjudicated that fire and safety alarms would also be installed. The authoritative also assured in regard to the installation of security cameras at the entrance of the premises, cash counter and above all other counters. There are a few portions of the building which strongly require amendments. The site will be used for banking purposes due to this fact, its security cannot be compromised however, camera at the top pf teller's desk is missing. Apart from it, the vaults are not placed accurately as they must be situated before lockers besides the door rather than in the back and both cash and gold vaults should have to be identical in terms of size and appearance. According to the agreement, the deadline of the work was 3rd December, 2021. Because of the fact that the work is inappropriate and needs updation I am exceeding the limit for five more days hoping to get satisfactory results by the end of this period, otherwise my company shall take a legal action for breaching the contract. Yours faithfully, Arun sharma
Dear sir,

I am writing to complain against the recent construction done by your
organisation
at my office building.

A contract regarding a
1000 square feet
branch of Axis Bank Ltd.
was signed
with you which held the making of cash counter, branch head's cabin with three other cabins beside this, a pantry, vault, store room, rest room and a sitting area. As per commercial building norms of local authorities it was
also
adjudicated that fire and safety alarms would
also
be installed
. The authoritative
also
assured in regard to the installation of security cameras at the entrance of the premises, cash counter and
above all
other counters.

There are a few portions of the building which
strongly
require amendments. The site will be
used
for banking purposes due to this fact, its security cannot
be compromised
however
, camera at the top pf teller's desk is missing. Apart from it, the vaults are not placed
accurately
as they
must
be situated
before
lockers
besides
the door
rather
than in the back and both cash and gold vaults should
have to
be identical in terms of size and appearance.

According to the agreement, the deadline of the work was 3rd
December, 2021
.
Because of the fact that
the work is inappropriate and needs
updation
I am exceeding the limit for five more days hoping to
get
satisfactory results by the
end
of this period,
otherwise
my
company
shall take a legal action for breaching the contract.

Yours
faithfully
, Arun
sharma
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IELTS letter Complaint to builder about the recent renovation

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  American English
6 paragraphs
248 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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