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vlog of your daily routines

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Hello everyone, I’m Don, I wake up at 5: 30 a. m in the morning to go jogging. I brush my teeth, change clothes and put on sunscreen. I often walk around the neighborhood. This time gave me to appreciate and enjoy small things like going around tranquility, morning air or birdsongs. And the sky is so beautiful, isn’t it? After that, I come home, have breakfast and spend some time preparing for next week’s lesson. I choose to play the piano or guitar to relax my mind after a long time doing homework. Let’s listen to a song that I play. Sorry I’m not very professional haha. Now I will take a nap and then I’ll hang out with my friends. The pandemic has lasted for 6 months and I have not had the opportunity to go out on the street. Today I decided to come back to enjoy the bustling atmosphere of Saigon. Remember to wear a mask. Look! These are great for a quick afternoon snack. I'll stop by an empty diner for dinner. Delicious right? And bring it back to my sister

Hello everyone,

I’m Don, I wake up at 5: 30 a. m in the morning to go jogging. I brush my teeth, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 clothes and put on sunscreen.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 walk around the neighborhood. This time gave me to appreciate and enjoy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 things like going around tranquility, morning air or Possible spelling mistake found.birdsongbird songs
birdsongs
. And the sky is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
, isn’t it?

After that, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 home, have breakfast and spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time preparing for next
 week’s lesson.

I choose to play the piano or guitar to relax my mind after a long time doing homework. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
’s listen to a song that I play. Sorry I’m not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 professional haha.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I will take a nap and then I’ll hang out with my friends. The pandemic has lasted for 6 months and I have not had the opportunity to go out on the street. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back to enjoy the bustling atmosphere of Saigon. Remember to wear a mask. Look! These are great for a quick afternoon snack.

I'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 by an empty diner for dinner. Delicious right?

And bring it back to my sister