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Complain latter.I have recently had my car repaired.

Complain latter. I have recently had my car repaired. QVxQK

Dear Mr Loyd, I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service quality I received when I had my car repaired on the 1 st June. Firstly, I had specifically requisted to repair my car’s radiator, from your employees. The following day, I came to your workshop to take my car. Despite the fact that I had driven for only one hour, I was forced to stop when the engine showed signs of overheating. Having added two litres of water the radiator, I was able to continue, althoug during the course of my journey a knocking sound from the engine became increasingly persistent. Furthermore, my car’s windscreen wipers stopped working. It has never been broken so far. So, The service wasn’t what I have come to expect from your establishment. I feel that your employees acted irresponsibly in issuing a car which wasn’t safe to drive. So I want you to send me 250$ to make me feel better after the distress I was forced to suffer as a result of your negligence. You’d better give this matter your urgent attention, or else I really will have to take legal action Yours faithfully, M. ALIQULOVA Mrs M. Aliqulova

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car
 repaired on the Did you mean "1st"?1st
1 st
 June.

Firstly
, I had specifically
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requisted
 to repair my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car’s
 radiator, from your employees. The following day, I came to your workshop to take my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
. Despite the fact that I had driven for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one hour, I was forced
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 when the engine This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 signs of overheating. Having This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 two Possible spelling mistake. 'litres' is British English.liters
litres
 of water the radiator, I was able to continue, Possible spelling mistake found.although
althoug
 during the course of my journey a knocking sound from the engine became increasingly
 persistent.

Furthermore
, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car’s
 windscreen wipers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
 working. It has never been broken
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so
 far. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, The service wasn’t what I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 from your establishment.

I feel that your employees acted irresponsibly
 in issuing a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 which wasn’t safe to drive. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I want you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$250".$250
250$
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me feel better after the distress I was forced
 to suffer as a result
 of your negligence.

You’d better give this matter your urgent attention, or else I really
 will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take legal action

Yours faithfully
,

M. Possible spelling mistake found.
ALIQULOVA


Mrs M. Possible spelling mistake found.
Aliqulova