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You have been going to a piano teacher for the past month. However, it no longer fits in your budget or busy schedule

You have been going to a piano teacher for the past month. However, it no longer fits in your budget or busy schedule ElMnR
Dear Mr Wales, I am writing this letter to you to inform you that I will not be able to continue learning piano anymore. The reason is, I am taking a sabbatical leave for a year from my career as a software engineer, and going to invest all of my time in building a business. As a result, I have decided to leave my favorite hobby of learning piano. Since last few months, I have seen drastic improvement in my piano skills, all because of you being relentless and patient with me throughout. I am lucky to find a diligent teacher like you when I decided to start learning piano. However, I am at that stage in my life, where I have to make changes in my priorities. With this decision to embark on the journey of entrepreneurship, I have to give my full attention to this business that I am going to build. This asks me to abruptly leave the piano class from you. I am leaving it only for the duration till I get comfortable with my new life and develop a regular routine. After that I am planning to join the class back. I will come back to you and ask to teach me again from where I am leaving. Hope you understand. Sincerely, Brijesh
Dear Mr Wales,

I am writing this letter to you to inform you that I will not be able to continue learning
piano
anymore. The reason is, I am taking a sabbatical
leave
for a year from my career as a software engineer, and going to invest all of my time in building a business.
As a result
, I have decided to
leave
my favorite hobby of learning piano.

Since last few months, I have
seen
drastic improvement in my
piano
skills
, all
because
of you being relentless and patient with me throughout. I am lucky to find a diligent teacher like you when I decided to
start
learning
piano
.
However
, I am at that stage in my life, where I
have to
make
changes
in my priorities. With this decision to embark on the journey of entrepreneurship, I
have to
give my full attention to this business that I am going to build. This asks me to
abruptly
leave
the
piano
class
from you.

I am leaving it
only
for the duration till I
get
comfortable with my new life and develop a regular routine.
After
that I am planning to
join
the
class
back. I will
come
back to you and ask to teach me again from where I am leaving. Hope you understand.

Sincerely
,

Brijesh
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IELTS letter You have been going to a piano teacher for the past month. However, it no longer fits in your budget or busy schedule

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6.0
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