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you are the president of a football team and wish to organize an event to celebrate your teams success in the league .write a letter tell them the details of the event

you are the president of a football team and wish to organize an event to celebrate your teams success in the league. write a letter tell them the details of the event Grpg2
Firstly i wish to appreciate the team's success in the Championship league this year and congratulate to all of the members. this is a great honor to be a part of this incredible and hardworking team. I wish to inform you that we will host an event to celebrate the team'sucess. It will be held on 21st of july at the City Hall. The party will be start at 5 o'clock in the evening and please be more than welcome to bring your family or friends by yourselves up to 5 persons. although the party will not have any dress code, it will be appreciated to dress formal. As a result of Covid-19 pandemia, using appropriate face mask will be obligatory as well. In order to thank our fans for supporting us during the season we wish to invite our top club fans for the party. Therefore, you should announce the party news on your official social media accounts.
Firstly
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
wish to appreciate the team's success in the Championship league this year and congratulate to
Consider using "all the".
all of the
members.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
this
is a great honor to be a part of this incredible and hardworking team.

I wish to inform you that we will host an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
to celebrate the team'
Possible spelling mistake found.
sucess
. It will
be held
on 21st of
Possible spelling mistake found.
july
at the City Hall. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
at 5 o'clock in the evening and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
be more than welcome to bring your family or friends by yourselves up to 5 persons.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
although
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
will not have any dress code, it will
be appreciated
to dress formal.
As a result
of Covid-19
Possible spelling mistake found.
pandemia
, using appropriate face mask will be obligatory
as well
.

In order to thank our fans for supporting us during the season we wish to invite our top club fans for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
.
Therefore
, you should announce the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
news on your official social media accounts.
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IELTS letter you are the president of a football team and wish to organize an event to celebrate your teams success in the league. write a letter tell them the details of the event

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  American English
3 paragraphs
159 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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