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tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house.

tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house. xDXja
Dear Himanshu, As you know Amit has purchased a new house. Yesterday I went his house. His house is situated near the market where they can buy anything. everything is available in that market. Bus stop is also very near. I did not find any difficulty to reach his home. when I enter his house both sides of the house were placed a big fancy light. doors were well polished. Rooms were quiet spacious and well ventilated.
Dear Himanshu, As you know Amit has
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. Yesterday I went his
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house
. His
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house
is situated
near the market where they can
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buy
anything.
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everything
is available in that market. Bus
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also
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very
near. I did not find any difficulty to reach his home.
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when
I enter his
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house
both sides of the
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house
were placed
a
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big
fancy light.
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doors
were well polished. Rooms were
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quiet
spacious and well ventilated.
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IELTS letter tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house.

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1 paragraphs
77 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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