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You would like to work overseas. Write a letter to a job agent company. In your letter, you should state What job you would like to apply for What companies you are looking for Why you want to work overseas.

You would like to work overseas. Write a letter to a job agent company. In your letter, you should state What job you would like to apply for What companies you are looking for Why you want to work overseas. XN7r
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed on Monday March 25 in Seek for the position of quality assurance manager in Sydney. I graduated with a master’s degree in food safety from the University of Auckland in 2017. For the next three years, I had been working for New Zealand Dairy as a food safety specialist. Now, I am seeking for overseas job opportunities related to food quality control, in the hope that I can develop my potential further. If possible, I would like to choose a company with a good reputation located in Sydney. I would also prefer small private companies which give me more opportunities for promotion. The reason why I make the decision above is that my husband has recently been relocated to Sydney by his company and I am, therefore, seeking a position in the same area. I have enclosed my resume and an open letter of recommendation from my former employer. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully. Mia Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed on
Commas set off the month in a weekday-month-day date: "Monday,".
Monday
March 25 in Seek for the position of quality assurance manager in Sydney.

I graduated with a master’s degree in food safety from the University of Auckland in 2017. For the
next
three years, I had been working for New Zealand Dairy as a food safety specialist.
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Now
, I am seeking for overseas job opportunities related to food quality control, in the hope that I can develop my potential
further
.

If possible, I would like to choose a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
with a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
reputation located in Sydney. I would
also
prefer
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small
private
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
which give me more opportunities for promotion.

The reason why I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the decision above is that my husband has recently
been relocated
to Sydney by his
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company and
I am,
therefore
, seeking a position in the same area.

I have enclosed my resume and an open letter of recommendation from my former employer.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
.

Mia Smith
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IELTS letter You would like to work overseas. Write a letter to a job agent company. In your letter, you should state What job you would like to apply for What companies you are looking for Why you want to work overseas.

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  American English
9 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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