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you want to sell your laptop. you think a freind of your might like to buy it from you. write a letter to your friend. why are you selling it? describe the laptop suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

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Dear Monu, Hope you and your family are doing well! I remembered that you said you were interested in buying a Dell Inspiron last week. I just wanted to let you that I have decided to sell my laptop. I bought my laptop just 3 months ago, so it's still in good condition. The reason for selling it that I have joined a job in an IT company recently they have issued a brand new ASUS chrome book, which I think better for me. It has more advance features and applications. My Dell laptop has a new core i7 processor so it's very fast, it's also lightweight and has 13-hour battery life. It has a 17-inch screen and an HD webcam. It contains the latest software such as Photoshop, Adobe Reader, MS Office and Garage band. There are no scratches and it looks like new. If you are still interested, I will free next Monday morning, June 10th at 10 am, also Tuesday afternoon, June 11th, between 2 pm to 5 pm. Hope to hear from you soon. Thanks

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chrome book
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think
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so
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very
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fast
, it's also
 lightweight and has 13-hour battery life. It has a 17-inch screen and an HD webcam. It contains the latest software such as Photoshop, Adobe Reader, MS Office and Garage band. There are no scratches and it looks like new. If you are still
 interested, I will free next
 Monday morning, June 10th at 10 am, also
 Tuesday afternoon, June 11th, between 2 pm to 5 pm. Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Thanks