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Letter to a friend taking care of a pet

Letter to a friend taking care of a pet OKwj
Dear Sally Thank you for your offer to take care of our snails, while we travel to Egypt for a fortnight. We will be put up at the Hilton Hotel, Cairo, and the hotel number is 6753216. I will also be reachable through email and messenger, however, my phone will be switched off. Scabbers and Snelly are really easy to take care of, though their babies often try to escape when we open the lid. I will clean the terrarium before we leave, but you will need to feed them some vegetables and change their water every other day. I will leave some lettuce and carrots in the refridgerator and will handover the spare house key to you before we leave. While you are there, would be able to water the plants? The gardener will take care of the outdoor ones, but it would be awesome if you could water the indoor plants twice a week. I do appreciate your help. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Best regards Safeena
Dear Sally

Thank you for your offer to take care of our snails, while we travel to Egypt for a fortnight. We will
be put
up at the Hilton Hotel, Cairo, and the hotel number is 6753216. I will
also
be reachable through email and messenger,
however
, my phone will
be switched
off.

Scabbers
and
Snelly
are
really
easy to take care of, though their babies
often
try to escape when we open the lid. I will clean the terrarium
before
we
leave
,
but
you will need to feed them
some
vegetables and
change
their water every other day. I will
leave
some
lettuce and carrots in the
refridgerator
and will
handover
the spare
house
key to you
before
we
leave
.

While you are there, would be able to water the plants? The gardener will take care of the outdoor ones,
but
it would be awesome if you could water the indoor plants twice a week. I do appreciate your
help
.

Looking forward to seeing you
soon
.

Best regards

Safeena
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend taking care of a pet

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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