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write a letter to your boss telling them you lost your bag. tell them where you lost it, what was in it and why it is important. write 150 words

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Dear Mr. Zgambo, I am writing to inform you of a lost bag. I had reported the bag as missing to our administration and IT departments earlier this morning when I could not find it in my cubicle. It is assumed to have gone missing over the weekend as the office was closed and non-operational then. The contents of the bag include my company-issued laptop and adapter, as well as the accounting departments' external hard drive. Due to the sensitivity of the client information on both devices, it is paramount that the bag and it's contents are retrieved at the shortest convenience. A formal report has been placed with the security firm as well as the local police. You shall be kept abreast of all developments with the matter. Yours Sincerely, Cat Brown.
Dear Mr.
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Zgambo
,

I am writing to inform you of a lost
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
. I had reported the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
as missing to our administration and IT departments earlier this morning when I could not find it in my cubicle. It
is assumed
to have gone missing over the weekend as the office
was closed
and non-operational then.

The contents of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
include my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
-issued laptop and adapter,
as well
as the accounting departments' external
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
drive.

Due to the sensitivity of the client information on both devices, it is paramount that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
and it's contents
are retrieved
at the shortest convenience. A formal report has
been placed
with the security firm
as well
as the local police.

You shall be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
abreast of all developments with the matter.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Cat Brown.

IELTS letter write a letter to your boss telling them you lost your bag. tell them where you lost it, what was in it and why it is important. write 150 words

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
133 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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